Feedback by Charles Watson, July 1 · 32 pins from the review link · Compiled July 6 · Site: watson-fs.pages.dev
How to approve: review the numbered pins below, then tell Rhea in session. Examples: "Approve all," "Approve all except pin 6," or "Pin 8: use option B." Six pins are marked YOUR CALL: they need a decision or carry a recommendation to confirm. Nothing deploys until you say go.
32 total pins
20 proposed edits
6 your call
6 pure praise
Homepage /
Pin 2 hero photo: "Love the look of this picture in the background."
Pin 3 signature logo: "Really like the signature here."
Pin 4 nav: "Love using the word INVITE here."
Pin 9 What We Sing intro: "This paragraph is perfect."
Pin 10 genre cards: "These are awesome."
Pin 1EditHero eyebrow line
"wonder if this could have more than one word on the second line. looks good on the phone layout."Charles
The tagline "Sent to encourage and build up fellow believers in Christ." wraps with a single word stranded on line two at desktop widths. Fix: balanced text wrapping on that line (a one-line CSS change, no copy change). Phone stays as is.
Pin 5EditOur Story section, second paragraph
"Maybe, '…were sent: to encourage, refresh, and build up fellow believers.'"Charles
CurrentWe sing because we believe we were sent to, to encourage you and build up your people.
ProposedWe sing because we believe we were sent: to encourage, refresh, and build up fellow believers.
Pin 6Your CallOur Story section, scripture block (Micah 6:8)
"I wonder if this is the right place for this verse…there might be a more musical one that would fit better. I love the verse but it feels more like a place for Psalm 23."Charles
Swap the Micah 6:8 block for a more musical verse. Options (attribution stays "Papa Charles"):
A (recommended) Psalm 95:1 — "Oh come, let us sing to the LORD; let us make a joyful noise to the rock of our salvation!"
B Colossians 3:16 — "…singing psalms and hymns and spiritual songs, with thankfulness in your hearts to God."
C Keep Micah 6:8 where it is.
Worth a quick check with the family; "Papa Charles's favorite verse" is the caption, so if the verse changes, the caption may need to change with it.
Pin 7EditScripture reference line
"Should probably not put the translation here. As silly as it is…translations can be controversial for people."Charles
CurrentMicah 6:8 (ESV)
ProposedMicah 6:8
Applied to every translation label across the site, not just this one.
Pin 8Your CallWhat We Sing headline
"Not sure about this sentence. We are stumped about what to put…just wanted to give feedback."Charles
CurrentWorship to Meet Your Congregation Where It's At.
They asked us to propose. Options:
A (recommended) Songs for Every Congregation.
B Worship That Meets Your People Where They Are.
C From the Old Hymns to Modern Worship.
Pin 11Your CallWhat to expect list, "Any denomination is welcome" icon
"What is this symbol?"Charles
The current icon is a pair of open hands, and it is not reading clearly. Recommendation: replace it with a simple dove or praying-hands icon (the cross is already used on the Hymns card). Iris can supply the final mark; needs your OK on direction.
Pin 12Your CallHear Our Family, second recording card
"Not that song…lol"Charles
Current"Righteousness Is Coming!" · YouTube / @Watsonfamilysingers
Proposed"Get Behind Me" (Erin Watson, Official Lyric Video), their most-viewed upload
Any recording from their channel works here; confirm the pick (or ask Charles which one he'd like).
Pin 13EditHow It Works, step 2 "Confirm Your Date"
"Is this 'we' or 'you'?"Charles
CurrentWe route our travels across the country, so if your date lines up with our path, you say yes and it is on the calendar. We take it from there.
ProposedWe route our travels across the country, so if your date lines up with our path, we confirm it and get it on the calendar. We take it from there.
Pins 14 + 15 + 16EditWhere We Have Sung section (one combined rework)
"*change sung to been" · "Something other than a number here. Numerous, many, multiple, etc." · "Third time to use 'we have sung' back to back. Maybe break it up."Charles, pins 14, 15, 16
CurrentWhere We Have Sung / We Have Sung for More Than 50 Churches, Events, and Gatherings. / We have sung at many churches, events, and gatherings, from Sunday services to festivals, camps, and fellowships. We love being invited...
ProposedWhere We Have Sung (eyebrow keeps the phrase once) / We Have Been Welcomed by Many Churches, Events, and Gatherings. / From Sunday services to festivals, camps, and fellowships, we love being invited, and we love even more watching congregations feel uplifted and encouraged by the music.
One rework clears all three pins: "sung" appears once, the number is gone, no back-to-back repeats. Included: the other "50" mentions on the homepage (closing section "after 50+ of them" becomes "after so many of them," and the search-listing description) get the same treatment for consistency.
About /about/
Pin 32 Meet the Family section: "We like all of this."
Pin 17EditLife as a Singing Family, headline
"change to 'A House of Melody'"Charles
CurrentWe Are a Loud, Happy House.
ProposedA House of Melody.
Pins 18 + 19EditFirst paragraph
"I like the idea of this sentence, but would prefer this wording. 'We are a regular family: sometimes we laugh too loud, we can get on each other's nerves, and somebody is always singing, even when….'" · "remove 'just'"Charles, pins 18, 19
CurrentWe are a regular family. We get on each other's nerves, we laugh way too loud, and somebody is always singing when they are supposed to be doing something else. There are six of us, and somewhere along the way singing together just became the thing we do...
ProposedWe are a regular family: sometimes we laugh too loud, we can get on each other's nerves, and somebody is always singing, even when they are supposed to be doing something else. There are six of us, and somewhere along the way singing together became the thing we do, in the kitchen, in the van, and up at the front of a church.
Pins 20 + 21 + 22 + 23EditSecond paragraph
"Rewording: 'Music and faith go hand in hand with us.'" · "change 'just' to 'simply'" · "remove 'honestly'" · "add 'when'"Charles, pins 20, 21, 22, 23
CurrentMusic and faith are kind of one and the same around here. The kids grew up on it, and honestly nobody can remember a time it was any different. When we load up and drive to your church, we just bring all of that with us...
ProposedMusic and faith go hand in hand with us. The kids grew up on it, and nobody can remember a time when it was any different. When we load up and drive to your church, we simply bring all of that with us, the same songs we sing at home, only now you get to sing along too.
Pin 24EditThird paragraph
"Replace 'and' with 'Most Importantly,…'"Charles
Current...we love getting to share it. And if your people walk out a little more encouraged than they walked in, that is the best part of the whole thing.
Proposed...we love getting to share it. Most importantly, if your people walk out a little more encouraged than they walked in, that is the best part of the whole thing.
Events /events/
Pin 25EditInvite Us to Sing band, bottom of page
"remove this sentence"Charles
Current...we would love to come worship with your people. There is no booking fee. All it takes is an invitation.
Proposed...we would love to come worship with your people. All it takes is an invitation.
Interpretation to confirm: the pin sits on the last lines of this paragraph. Since pin 30 keeps "no booking fee" on the Invite page but adds the love-offering context, we read this as: drop the bare "no booking fee" claim here, where there's no room for the nuance. Same treatment as pin 27.
Music /music/
Pin 28 footer: "LOVE!"
Pin 26EditVideo grid order
"This video should be the first/main video"Charles, pinned on "Watson Family Singers: About Us"
CurrentFeatured (full width, top): "Get Behind Me" · Grid: The Sandwich Song, Righteousness Is Coming!, About Us, Straying Pilgrims
ProposedFeatured (full width, top): "Watson Family Singers: About Us" · Grid: Get Behind Me, The Sandwich Song, Righteousness Is Coming!, Straying Pilgrims
Pin 27EditInvite Us to Sing band, bottom of page
"remove sentence"Charles
CurrentIf your people could use a time of real, family gospel music, we would love to bring it to them. There is no booking fee. All it takes is an invitation.
ProposedIf your people could use a time of real, family gospel music, we would love to bring it to them. All it takes is an invitation.
Same interpretation as pin 25; see the note there.
Invite /invite/
Pin 29EditHero paragraph, occasions list
"add 'Sunday School party'"Charles
CurrentWhether it is a Sunday service, a revival, a homecoming, or a gathering of any kind...
ProposedWhether it is a Sunday service, a revival, a homecoming, a Sunday School party, or a gathering of any kind...
Pin 30EditHero paragraph, after "There is no booking fee."
"Add sentence 'We come on an expense plus love offering basis.' after 'There is no booking fee.'"Charles
Current...we will be in touch to work out the details. There is no booking fee.
Proposed...we will be in touch to work out the details. There is no booking fee. We come on an expense plus love offering basis.
Pin 31Your CallBooking form, "Congregation or audience size" field
"I wonder if this could be a drop down with options. Example >50; 50-100; etc"Charles
Recommendation: do it. Replace the free-text field with a dropdown: Under 50 / 50 to 100 / 100 to 250 / 250+ / Not sure yet. Keeps the form easy on a phone and gives the family cleaner info. The form's email handler gets updated to match.